Glad you liked it, I find writing action sequences really difficult. It's so difficult making sure everyone is only in one place at any one time (which is why it takes me so long to write these chapters), I'm never happy with the end result but oh well I'll learn. Next chapter should be quicker less fighting and more plot development.
Quatre is off to hit a hornet's nest with a big stick (metaphorically speaking), so the next chapter will have lots about him. I'm hoping to sneak in some Heero/Duo developments too but so far they only seem to want to talk to Wufei not each other (annoying boys).
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Date: 2008-07-30 03:00 pm (UTC)Quatre is off to hit a hornet's nest with a big stick (metaphorically speaking), so the next chapter will have lots about him. I'm hoping to sneak in some Heero/Duo developments too but so far they only seem to want to talk to Wufei not each other (annoying boys).