All I can say is thank Methos for the later deadline.

Getting your money's worth from your beta :0) you know what they say, third time lucky.

Been tinkering with mine over lunch and wrote an extra, link to the explanation paragraph and it now fits... sort of, I think. A bit more shuffling and probably another couple of paragraphs so it doesn't jump so abruptly to The End and I think I have a working story draft.